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Old 20th November 2008 , 02:39 PM
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Default Trancey Track, opinion on mix pls

just tried doing a trance track, first time for me, this is a rough idea but do you guys think i should lower the bass and i feel something is a miss with the side chaining of the airy leads but not sure what? any tips? intro needs work i know, well the whole thing but just looking for some advice on where i should go with this other than the trash

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Old 21st November 2008 , 11:37 AM
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Not really my forte but I think it is a good club track. I am putting together a Dance, House, Trance album (about halfway ish) so am not really a master of these genres.

I initially thought your track was way too short...total silence almost at one point (I can see why), then of course things started to warm up right about the same time..nice beat. The bass is quite edgy...what did you use for that?
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lol, i was thinking that myself this morning, i wanted to work on it on my laptop and needed to be sure i had the same sounds, well after double checking its a mix of a virus lead from gladiator and a vengeance sound pack for massive, the track needs a good arrangement and something to stop the intro sound so dull
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lol, i was thinking that myself this morning, i wanted to work on it on my laptop and needed to be sure i had the same sounds, well after double checking its a mix of a virus lead from gladiator and a vengeance sound pack for massive, the track needs a good arrangement and something to stop the intro sound so dull
I thought the bass had some bite on it. The virus has a very distinctive sound. More interest leading into the track is a good idea, yes.

Getting variation is more work but I guess it is worth it to keep listeners levels of interest as high as possible.
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well i will work on it again tuesday hopefully, got a couple ideas, what a lonely road we travel on this winding road hey
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well i will work on it again tuesday hopefully, got a couple ideas, what a lonely road we travel on this winding road hey
Funny but yeah it can be lonely but it can also be fun. Some ideas arrive faster than others on some days, but once projects are complete it's all worth it IMO. The biggest issue I have faced is the software I have used not so much the ideas...it's amazing how fast a glitch, bug, audio drop out or hung app can dry up a perfectly good idea.
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if find for me its the lack of knowledge to create the ideas
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That's never what they call trance these days.

Masterclass for me, was this. Still love it to this day, but moreso now because it's one of those tracks I'd itch to remix !



But I like what you were doing. It needs to be quicker to qualify as trance
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how about trance for old folk then, I hate all this sub genre stuff
What genre would you say it best fits?
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For your first attemt it's a really nice track
good job
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For your first attemt it's a really nice track
good job
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Nice - like that track
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cheers K you fluffy orange feline
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I don't know much about trance but do think this might be a bit slow for that style as mentioned earlier. I like it though. Pity about the sound stopping every now and then.
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yeah i think i labelled it wrong, not sure what to call it but will try and finish this
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