Nice! You've got a few more of those sounds you were after, (the swishy build up for one
It's shaping up nicely, keep it going and keep experimenting. Trying to 'reverse engineer' a sound you like is how I've stumbled upon some really cool techniques and methods, producing sounds I wasn't initiall going for but kinda happens...
One more link that basically focuses on forming good trance lead melodies. A personal favourite of mine this because of the guy's teaching style lol
Trance lead tutorial in reason 4.0